Monday 8 August 2016

This is my simile poem

I am as ….
Fast as a Cheetah  
Slow as a Snail
Small as a kitten
Large as a Horse
Happy as a Dog
Sad as a  Pug
Nice as a Dolphin   
Mean as a Giant
Cold as a Ice block
Hot as a Sun
Weak as a Baby  
Strong as a wolf
Loud as Elephant  
Quiet as  a Mice
Tough as a Rino
Gentle as a  Snail
Brave as a Bear
Shy as a  Newborn kitten
Wild as a Horse
Lazy as a Sloth

Put it all together and you’ve got Billie !

4 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful collection of similes. I do not think I have ever met you when you are as 'shy as a newborn kitten.' It is a wonderful image.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Hi, This is Elenoa from Papakura Central School. Your simile poem really made me smile because I found some of the similes really funny. I might try and remember these for my writing next time.

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  3. Hi im Ruby from Papakura Central School, And i love your poem i think i know what your like now you described it so Amazingly that i know exactly what your like now anyways bye from Ruby-PCS

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  4. Hi Billie,I like how you said at the end, put it all together and you’ve got Billie! Have you thought to make the font a bit smaller. Also how did you come up with all those good ideas to write?
    From Sophie at Awahono School

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