Friday 12 February 2016

my acrostic poem by billie.

 bright and bubbly person and a really good listener                                                                     

i love to swim and. play with my dog and cat
love to bake cakes and then eat the cake  
like to go on nice and long walks with my family and are dog
i like ice cream while i'm washing teen wolf
excited  about learning  like to know. all the people in my class and my teacher.

4 comments:

  1. Wow what great poem you have there!
    I really like the words that you used in your poem.
    When you said that you are bright that is very trough and if you wern't here then it would be dark, what I am meant to be saying is your smile lights the whole world :D

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  2. Wow what great poem you have there!
    I really like the words that you used in your poem.
    When you said that you are bright that is very trough and if you wern't here then it would be dark, what I am meant to be saying is your smile lights the whole world :D

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  3. I have learned a lot about you from reading your acrostic poem, Billie. Do you like to have ice-cream after one of your long walks? Remember to proofread for capital letters.

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  4. I have learned a lot about you from reading your acrostic poem, Billie. Do you like to have ice-cream after one of your long walks? Remember to proofread for capital letters.

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